IELTS Writing Sample

28.More and more women go out to work. Is it the governments responsibility to subsidize them and provide free staff and facilities to care for their children? To what extent do you agree or disagree to this idea?

The rapid development of economy and society results in the significant improvement of womens social status. More and more women, confined to baby-sitting and chores previously, have stepped out of their family and become career women. But in the meantime, career women are confronted with considerable nuisances, one of which is baby caring. (53 words)

Womens participation in the employment contributes a great deal to the society. Thanks to womens patience, warmth and carefulness, most women are employed as secretaries, nurses, consultants and baby sitters. But due to the pressure from work and family, they cannot concentrate themselves fully on their work. Some countries and governments adopted some active measures to resolve the contradiction, such as the policy of feasible working time, which renders women some freedom. However, this is not a radical solution. (79 words)

From my point of view, the government should subsidize women in baby caring and provide charge-free facilities and working staff to relieve women of their pressure. On the one hand, women can focus themselves on their work and study, with no distraction from their family and children. In return, factories and companies can benefit a lot from the practice of subsidiary, which exempts them from the losses caused by female absentees. On the other hand, children enjoy the right of education. Many countries give priority to childrens education, providing children with free elementary schooling, which not only popularizes knowledge, but also cultivates skilled talent for the society. Besides, the United Nations have issued relevant laws and regulations with a view to protecting childrens educational right. (125 words)

To sum up, a government should spare no efforts to relieve women of their burden and shoulder the responsibility of childrens education, which is not only a governments obligation, but also peoples appeal. (33 words) (290 words)